What to omit from your next appeal

Answer?

1. Abstractions
2. Intangibles
3. Anything that can’t be clearly visualized

What to put in?

1. People
2. Painterly details
3. Sensory descriptions

This will make your writing far more vivid and your appeals far more effective.

It’s easy to say no to a concept.  It’s nearly impossible to ignore something so clear we can see it in our mind’s eye.

Comments

These are the same items to include in an appeal for anything, not just non-profit fundraising. I like the short, sweet, and simple post. It’s true, it’s right, and it’s to the point. If only all writers, fundraisers, and salespeople understood how to take a concept and make it real.

Posted by Samantha Gluck  on  07/11  at  10:12 PM

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