Before and after: A website goes from good to great

We’ve got a great story posted at Network for Good.

Ken Hayes of Give2Give Hope has graciously allowed us to use Give2Give Hope’s site as an example of before and after. Thanks to the organization for the inspiration!

give2givehope.org Before:

I gave feedback on this site:

Things I loved:

  * Photos of children
  * Donate button above the fold (meaning, you don’t have to scroll to see it)
  * Email signup above the fold
  * Tangible results are highlighted
  * Social sharing links top right, where they belong
  * Address is easy to find
  * Navigation is easy to understand and donor-centric

Here were the things I cited to improve:

* Make the home page a little less busy to avoid the paradox of choice
* The site had a carousel of constantly changing photos that made it hard to really stare at and connect with one – I’d stick with one child, who you change on page refresh
* The photo to the left with “sponsor and child” and the photos to the right on the carousel competed with each other and confused the visitor.
* I wasn’t crazy about the childlike font—hard to read and not inspiring of trust. 
* Reduce the number of reading options.
* Drastically shorten the text in the center of the page.  Remember, people skim, not read, online.

Here is the revised site - which is stellar:

Beautiful work!

In addition, I admire Give2Give Hope’s use of email signatures.  Ken’s email signature reads as follows.  It’s extremely well done:

In 2009, on my first trip out of the country, I came face-to-face with poverty and suffering unlike anything I had experienced before… I held a child in my arms who had gone days without a full belly, who never owned a pair of shoes, who drank water filled with parasites, who didn’t even have a bed to sleep on. My heart was broken. God gave me a job to do that day, and with the help of many generous people along the way, Give2GiveHope is working to feed children both physically and spiritually and making a life-long impact on an entire community. Help Give2GiveHope provide hope for a better tomorrow by supporting us prayerfully and financially. Sponsor a child today for $30/month or visit our website at http://www.give2givehope.org for more information on how you can get involved.

Great job!

Comments

Really interesting post.

It would be great to know how these changes have impacted the site’s stickiness, online giving, or other similar metrics. 

I’m guessing the new site is doing much better, but would love to see the stats.

Posted by Melody Scott  on  10/27  at  03:56 PM

Thanks for the question, Melody.

Give2GiveHope is a baby non-profit (just over 2 years old), 100% staffed by volunteers who all have ‘day jobs’, and we’re still “learning the ropes” to all that is involved in running/marketing a non-profit.

It’s difficult for us to give hard facts on impact as we don’t have well established trends to be able to compare against.  Let me explain what I can…

The changes Katya suggested were implemented August 13, 2011.

I looked into our google analytics - which we began capturing in Sept 2010.  If you compare year-to-year, our traffic is acutally down comparing the month of Sept 2010 to Sept 2011.  But pageviews are up 23%, pages/visit are up 50%, new visits up 12% and time on site is up 47%.

If I compare more recent traffic (say 6 weeks before to 6 weeks after) everything has gone down except for new visits (+14%).

Part of this can be explained by the cycle of our annual activities and what we’ve experience this year - our first ever furndraiser at a school in May, our second annual mission trip in late June/July, our first event fundraiser that just got occured last Saturday, etc.  So we haven’t really established any sort of good ‘benchmark’ to be able to firmly say that the changes we made to the site had “X” affect on our traffic or giving.

Additionally, as a full-time webmaster for a hospital (Give2GiveHope is what I do in my “free” time), I have some very real world exposure to the fact that when our marketing team runs billboards, TV commercials, radio commercials, Google AdWords, and print pieces (direct mail postcards or newspaper ads) about a service the hospital offers, we see a HUGE increase in web traffic and ‘actionable’ activities (making an appointment, scheduling a visit with a doctor, etc.).  And when those other supporting marketing pieces disappear the web traffic plummets.  It’s been demonstrated time after time, that web is just a piece of the pie and without those other parts of the media mix, we really have a difficult time showing results.

Since Give2GiveHope is new, small, and lacks the kind of marketing budget a hospital does, the improvement and changes to our website aren’t supported with those other pieces of the puzzle (TV, radio, direct mail, billboards, etc) so it’s hard to put a hard “ROI” on the changes we made given our lack of benchmark and lack of other-channel marketing support.  Needless to say, Katya’s advice was solid - and without a questions “spot on”.  Even as a webmaster, it’s good to have some ‘outside’ eyes to point out areas you can improve on design and function… we all have a tendacy to live in our ‘bubble’ and we become so familiar with our cause or product that we don’t see things the way the “public” sees them.

For example, the “childlike” font that was used on the old version is actually a font built on my daughter’s handwriting.  Very cute and sentimental to me, but not conveying the professionalism that our organization needs to - as pointed out by Katya.  I was endeared to it, but Katya was right -  not the impression I want to send out.

So, even though our traffic has decreased since the changes were made, should I have kept the font?  Without a question - no - it wasn’t adding anything to the website, and may have actually had some negative affects. I look at the other changes we made the same way… is organized and clean better than cluttered and confused?  You bet… even when traffic hasn’t increased…  So at this point, I’m personally measuring my ROI on the ‘quality’ of the impressions I’m giving instead of the ‘quantity’ of impression made… might be a little skewed, but given we have little else to benchmark against at this point, it is what it is smile

Posted by Ken Hayes  on  10/27  at  06:13 PM

Very well done Katya!  It’s good to see that pageviews and time on site have increased.  I’d be curious to see if donations or email subscribers increased after the changes.  I guess the only addition I would have made is point an arrow to or have a person pointing to/looking at the donation link.  Readers tend to follow visual cues and are more likely to take action.  Good job!

Posted by Tory McBroom  on  11/16  at  04:34 AM

Hey Katya, great work. It makes sense to keep a website clutter free. Offering visitors too many options is not good as it can be confusing for them on what action to take.
I like Torys idea in the comment section about drawing attention to the donation link.

Posted by Mike Hill  on  02/24  at  05:30 PM

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